Triangular Comments H.W #4

To Richard Y,

Hey Richard, awesome paper you have written. You are such a great writer. Your paper is so strong and deep. It is understandable and enjoyable. I appreciated your knowledge of coming up with great thoughts.

You explain why and why not digital/ electronic media is important to the world. You made a great connection of how the internet makes this world full of pleasures. You made a good point of how people became famous, realizing how much the world has change, meeting new friends, and entertaining us. You also included why digital/electronic media are "bad" and how their affect our world. Viruses, hackers, assholes, very explaninable. Good on gathering the informations.

People enjoy their times on the computers, facebooking, television, what-so-ever, but could also harm us in different ways. I think others will enjoy your post and feel the same way as me.

Richard, your paper is realistic, but you should contuine to build more information into it. And you should had added yourself, friends or families onto your draft.

I feel the same way as your paper. It is a way to help me enjoy my life and not feeling left out. My desktop is like a wife to me. I treated with respect. Lol

Thanks a lot for sharing your essay and i enjoy it. Good developments and strong thoughts.

To Aja,

Well done Aja! Loveeee your paper!! You are such a strong creative writer. Your paper is amazing and thoughtful. I bet you put a lot of efforts into this draft. It is simply clear and your break down your majors points, to make it easy for us to read. *happy tears* I see where you're going shawty.

You explain how digital/electronic media bring hopes to every teenagers that uses technology. Teenagers are so dependent on the computer which maes us smarter and enjoy life better. You made a good point of how different types of electronic media allows us to communicate in certain ways. Good example of how you dont want to talk to you mom on the fone instead you text her. Very thoughtful of how you bring up the issue of using ATM. Very clever.

People enjoys these technologies and it gave us a chance to change our lives, but sometimes it may hurt us. Yupp, it is rare to see someone our age not using digital/electronic media. i agree.

Aja, your paper is sexy but you should also include more about yourself which makes it even more "sexier" LOL. i like your follow-up questions. Makes you think harder.=}

One question that your post brings up for me, is that will you rather text or call your boyfriend? Cos people in our class kept mentioning about how people like to make up shit on aim. I been through this... you know what im saying? =P

Thanks for updating this wonderful essay about digital/electrionic media. You put a lot of thoughts into this paper.